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@@ -9,12 +9,16 @@ a dataset taking the statistics from
 [voidlinux popcorn](https://popcorn.voidlinux.org/) and transforming them into
 an easily parseable csv-based dataset.
 
-I then used the data for further analysis, the results of which is a long-form
-article which will hopefully be published here soon.
+The data show daily statistics of the [Void Linux](https://voidlinux.org/) repositories,
+with unique daily users, the Linux kernel versions present,
+and individual package installation break-downs.
+I used the data for some further analysis,
+the result of which is a long-form article which will hopefully be published here soon.
 
-But I also thought, until then, let's have some further learning fun while we're
-at it and do a little exploratory data analysis with
-[`nushell`](https://nushell.sh).
+But I also thought ---
+until then ---
+let's have some further fun learning while we're at it,
+and do a little exploratory data analysis with [`nushell`](https://nushell.sh).
 
 In a nutshell, nushell is a unix-like shell environment which transports
 structured data through its pipes, making some data exploration processes